Inner Voice: All Heroines Hear My Inner Voice Chapter 1: I thought this a normal world, apparently...
~ Notes Before Reading ~
The plot that has been changed by the MC:
To Love Ru: 83%
Highschool DxD: 82%
Shinmai Maou no Testament: 92%
Oregairu: 89%
Saekano: 84%
Oshi no Ko: 100%
Rascal Does Not Dream Of Bunny Girl Senpai: 100%
Mieruko-chan: 89%
Trinity Seven: 38%
This is the plot change process of the latest Chapter and will change as the story progresses.
By the way, the grammar at the beginning is bad and will improve as the Chapter progresses. However, my writing style will not change much because this is an inner voice novel, which means that there will be many reactions from each character.
Oh and in Chapter hundreds there will be a group chat to prevent the loss of interaction between the heroines. It's a special chat group for the heroines in the MC's harem.
That's all. Happy reading and please be patient with my writing style.
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Chapter 1
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While ascending the stairs towards the second-year students' floor, Eiji heard the sounds of hurried footsteps and a loud voice echoing from above in the school hallway.
"No running in the hallway! Yuki Rito, I'm warning you, stop running and accept your punishment!"
From the tone of the voice, it was clearly an enraged girl.
She appeared to be in pursuit of someone identified as Yuki Rito.
Upon hearing this name, Eiji halted his ascent mid-staircase, his eyes widening as if a realization had dawned upon him.
Yuki Rito? Don't tell me...
"Stop running? Yui, you're running too! You're also breaking school rules!"
"Also, can you stop chasing me? I told you, it was an accident! I didn't do it on purpose!"
A boy's voice joined the fray this time, seemingly belonging to the individual known as Yuki Rito.
As expected.
A boy with familiar spiky brown hair came hurtling down the stairs as the voice grew nearer.
Eiji, who had been positioned in the middle of the staircase, inevitably met the other party's gaze.
The boy nearly collided with him but managed to violently twist his body, nearly losing his footing. He uttered an "Sorry!" as he brushed past and continued his frantic escape.
Eiji offered no reply, choosing to ignore him. His attention then shifted to a black-haired girl rapidly descending the stairs.
That girl must be Yui.
That Yui, indeed.
"As the moral head of the general committee, I am an exception! To punish degenerates like you, I--Ah..."
It was as if time had slowed to a crawl; her words were cut short before she could finish.
There was no rain.
There was no thunder.
The sky was clear.
The floor was dry.
It was even clean, with no stray banana peels lying about.
But...
The girl inexplicably lost her footing.
"Yui!"
Yuki Rito, having already put some distance between himself and the stairs, spotted Yui on the verge of tumbling down.
Panic seized him as he attempted to race back up the stairs to her rescue.
However, given the remaining distance of two to three meters, it was practically impossible for him to reach her in time to catch her.
It was estimated that a fall down the stairs under such circumstances would undoubtedly result in a concussion, and at the very least, some limbs would surely be fractured or bleed profusely.
Observing the girl's body suspended in mid-air from his slowed-down perspective, Eiji let out an internal sigh.
I thought this was a normal world, but apparently not...
Sigh...
Extending his hand, he immaculately caught Yui's falling form, cradling her in his arms just as she was about to plummet.
"Hn..."
Yui expressed her surprise. As she fell, she had instinctively closed her eyes, bracing for the anticipated pain.
Yet, instead of discomfort, she felt only a soft embrace.
Upon opening her eyes, she beheld the visage of a boy, clad in the male student uniform of her school. Initially, she mistook him for Rito, but it was not him. The boy who had caught and saved her was, in fact, someone else!
His short-cropped blond hair.
His blue eyes, gazing at her, possessed a brilliance akin to diamonds...
Not only that, but his countenance was also strikingly handsome, resembling a prince from a fairytale!
His distinctly anime-like features captivated her, causing her cheeks to flush crimson.
For a fleeting moment, the chase for Rito completely slipped from her mind.
From Eiji's vantage point, observing the girl in his arms blushing and gazing at him with a stunned expression.
He offered a wry smile.
The other party's reaction was evidently a consequence of his excessively handsome face.
He was about to inquire, "Are you alright?"
But before the words could escape his lips, a virtual screen materialized abruptly before his eyes.
?{Ding! Detected that the host has altered a plot point within the [To Love Ru] franchise.}
?{Successfully thwarted 0.1% of the plot of [To Love Ru]}
?{The corresponding Golden Finger has been successfully activated!}
?{Ding! Congratulations, host, you have acquired the Inner Voice System!}
?{As long as you internally lament the plot; critique the storyline, the heroines, or the protagonist, you will receive a random reward! These rewards may include skills, magical abilities, superpowers, mystical artifacts, and more.}
?{PS: Not every complaint you make will earn you a reward; it hinges on how adeptly you critique the unfolding plot, the heroine, or the protagonist directly before your eyes}.
?{Furthermore, now is an opportune moment to voice your grievances, as a heroine and the protagonist are in your vicinity!}
Having long accepted his reincarnation, he was thrilled when the golden finger he had eagerly awaited finally manifested!
It had been such a prolonged wait, but this boon had finally arrived!
If only he had arrived in this world a few years sooner...
In his previous existence, he likely wouldn't have been overly concerned about the impending calamities.
Possessing sufficient power and strength meant one feared nothing!
Well... perhaps not entirely.
For the moment, based on the system's explanations, he had a general grasp of how to utilize it to procure rewards.
Thus, he decided to give it a try.
With a subtle smile gracing his lips, Eiji turned to the young lady cradled in his arms and inquired, "Are you alright?"
From Yui's vantage point, Eiji's smile conjured an illusion of blooming flowers in the backdrop, akin to a handsome male lead depicted in a manga.
She couldn't quite recall the specific term for such an image.
"Y-Yes, I'm fine. Thank you..." she stammered, her face still flushed and heart pounding erratically.
Yielding to his embrace, Yui nestled against his chest, which, despite its firmness, offered a comforting warmth and a sense of security she found increasingly addictive.
Eiji offered a slight nod.
"Then I shall set you down."
Without awaiting her response, he gently lowered her to her feet.
Yui, no longer held in his arms, displayed a hint of disappointment as she stood independently.
Her gaze lingered on the strong hands that had moments before held her, seemingly reluctant to let go.
[Don't stare at my hands like that...]
[Goodness, does this girl wish to be carried by me indefinitely? She's quite grown! Though, compared to me, her body feels light, and I could hold her like this for hours.]
[As a transmigrator from another world, I recognize you from the anime I've seen.]
[If my memory serves me correctly, judging by her long black hair, brown eyes, delicate features, and a figure that's quite curvaceous for a high school student.]
[Hey~ isn't this Yui Kotegawa? One of the heroines from the anime *To Love Ru*? And the protagonist... The protagonist is here too!]
[Spiky orange-brown hair like nails, golden-brown eyes, a somewhat disheveled school uniform, and an ordinary face, yet he managed to amass a harem of beautiful girls in the original story.]
[Yuki Rito, if not for that protagonist halo gifted by the author, I doubt the heroines, like Yui for instance, would have fallen for him after enduring so many perverted accidental encounters.]
[Although Yui was initially often angered by Rito's advances, she gradually grew accustomed to them, only feigning anger when Rito once slipped and his face landed on her crotch.]
[What a lucky perverted bastard, the protagonist! I recall that the heroines also seemed to develop 'brain issues,' falling for him after numerous such scandalous incidents.]
[This girl before me... Yui, she's attractive, but it's a shame about her 'brain issues.' Never mind, it's probably best not to get too close to her.]
Eiji inwardly smirked.
Will this suffice, Miss System?
?{Ding! Congratulations to the host for obtaining the unique Kekkei Genkai, the Sharingan, with no detrimental side effects. Even without the Uchiha bloodline, your Sharingan will synchronize perfectly with your innate lineage}.
?[All rewards bestowed by the system are stored within the inventory and are accessible for integration or immediate use by the host at any moment].
Sharingan!
That Sharingan!?
Alright, that's enough for now. Despite his excitement, he could examine his reward later.
"W-What did you just say?" Yui inquired, her gaze fixed on him with undisguised surprise.
Astonishment was clearly etched on her face.
Eiji was perplexed. What was wrong with this girl? He hadn't uttered a word after setting her down.
"No, what did *you* say? I didn't say anything."
"Uh, but... I just heard a voice—something like �!#耀 (your voice saying something about me)."
Eiji: "???"
[What's wrong with this girl? Can she not even speak human language anymore?]
"Of course I can! �!#耀 (I *am* speaking human language! It was about you; how could I hear your voice when your mouth was closed?) "
Regrettably, whenever Yui attempted to articulate the thoughts she heard echoing in her mind.
Any content pertaining to that specific revelation was invariably censored, leaving her only able to utter unintelligible, babbling sounds like "Abababa."
Yui realized this limitation, and a blush of embarrassment spread across her face.
What did I just say!?
Why can't I articulate it properly!?
I clearly heard this boy standing before me discussing many things about me.
Things like me being one of the heroines, him being a time traveler, and Rito being the harem protagonist she would eventually fall for due to his perverted actions.
The first two points were acceptable.
But what was with the last one!?
Absolutely not. Under no circumstances.
Impossible! She couldn't possibly like that perverted Yuki Rito!
And why would this incredibly handsome young man before me wish to distance himself from me?
Is it because, as he claimed in the original work, I suffer from a mental affliction?
Listen, that 'original work' is merely a fabrication from your memory, understand?
I am, demonstrably, intelligent!
I consistently achieve the top academic results in my class, year after year!
There are absolutely no cognitive issues!
Furthermore, my feelings towards Yuki Rito, whenever he clumsily stumbles into girls at school in a lewd manner, are unequivocally those of pure anger and revulsion.
It happened just this morning. I witnessed Yuki Rito collide with my classmate, Haruna, causing her to fall and pinning her chest against his head.
All I felt was a surge of outrage at such flagrant indecency, which compelled me to pursue Yuki Rito to administer a scolding.
Though Yui was perplexed as to why she could perceive a voice that seemed to emanate from the inner thoughts of the young man before her.
A pang of sadness struck her upon realizing his desire to avoid her, stemming from the illogical premise that she would ever harbor feelings for a pervert like Yuki Rito.
"Yui! Are you alright!? I'm so sorry! My fault, truly! If I hadn't been running so recklessly, you wouldn't have tumbled down the stairs..."
Yuki Rito was already sprinting back towards the staircase.
Upon seeing Yui, who thankfully was unharmed, he exhaled a breath of profound relief.
His face a mask of utter misery, he offered profuse apologies.
But was it just my perception, or did Rito deliberately overlook Eiji, the one who had rescued Yui?
Huh?
Wait... Rito even harbors a hidden animosity in his gaze when he looks at Eiji?
Although fleeting and barely perceptible, Eiji caught the flicker of hostility in the protagonist's eyes the instant it appeared.
Eiji stood utterly bewildered.
He sensed that this Yuki Rito diverged significantly from his portrayal in the original narrative.
In the original work, Yuki Rito, despite his opportune perversions, was fundamentally a kind-hearted individual devoid of malice.
Yet, observing the Yuki Rito before him now, Eiji was certain that this young man bore a grudge against him.
Yui's expression was a complex mixture as she regarded Rito's apology. Initially inclined to anger, she was on the verge of accepting his remorse upon seeing his current demeanor.
However, at that precise moment, Rito's voice echoed within her mind.
Not only Yui, but Eiji heard it too.
{The audacity of that boy to touch my Yui's body with his filthy hands!}
{Even though I understand he acted to save her, it still enrages me... Damn it!}
{Who is this fellow? I've never encountered him before. His countenance, surpassing even my own protagonist-level handsomeness, ignites a burning desire to tear that face asunder.}
{Alas, Yui is present. Impulsive action is ill-advised. Were I to act rashly, openly displaying animosity towards this individual, I fear Yui might form a negative impression of me.}
{In my prior existence, I deeply regretted not incorporating you into my harem. After ascending to the Galactic Throne and perishing in the brutal interstellar conflict, the regret of not heeding Momo's counsel to become the Harem King was profound. Had I done so, at least I would not have departed this world with such unfulfilled desires!}
{But Providence has granted me a second chance. This time, I shall not falter and repeat the errors of my past life.}
{Yui, just as in the life before, I am resolved to make you fall for me! This time, assuredly, you shall become one of my consorts, bearing me numerous robust offspring, hehe...}
Rito maintained an appearance of complete innocence, his continuous apologies to Yui masking the depravity of his internal monologue from unsuspecting observers.
save for two discerning individuals, naturally.
Yui was left speechless, gazing at Yuki Rito's apologies with utter disbelief.
Eiji, conversely, was astonished. He wasn't particularly surprised that the Yuki Rito before him was, in fact, not the Yuki Rito from the original narrative.
This was already evident from Yuki Rito's concealed hostility towards him.
His suspicions had been aroused.
It appeared this Yuki Rito was a Regressor, someone who had met his demise in a past life only to be granted a renewed opportunity.
Given that he himself was a Reincarnator, this revelation was quite aligning.
However, what truly astonished him was...
Why could he perceive Yuki Rito's voice?
Or more precisely, he understood it had to be the boy's inner monologue.
Yet, the crucial question remained: Why?
Why was he privy to the protagonist's inner voice resonating within his own mind!?
It would have been tolerable had it been the gentle, satisfying inner voice of a heroine...
But this was the gruff, decidedly masculine voice of another man echoing in his head!
The alien male voice within his skull sent shivers down his spine.
Eiji declared his absolute inability to endure this situation further.
Esteemed System, I demand an explanation!
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(A/N: Please cast your power stones and share your thoughts on this novel! Your encouragement fuels my drive!)